Wickity isnspired me to make a break beat song.

[Moebius]

http://www.electronicmusic.us/music/...icOverture.mp3

I was listening to destroyer earlier this week, and wick was on. Blowin up the spot as usual, and he inspired me to make a break beat song. I don't know if it is any good, but take a listen!

:feedback: please.

[badkitty3804]

awww. He's your inspiration! :affection:

Anthony and Chris sitting in a tree...
K-I-S-S-I-N-G
First comes love,
then comes marriage....

:affection:

[Moebius]

But did you like it?

[Liftedtrance]

is it possible for you to email me your song?
work blocks me from going to that website to hear it....
but I'd like to check it owt..

[badkitty3804]

*listening now*

[Bioteknik]

well do you (mobius) like it? it doesn't have very many elements to really call it a full song.

[NotWickity]

awww. He's your inspiration! :affection:

Anthony and Chris sitting in a tree...
K-I-S-S-I-N-G
First comes love,
then comes marriage....

:affection:

Why are you always trying to start some shit? :traviswork:


See, I'm just spreading the gospel. Everyone likes breaks, they just need to be shown the way. :raveon:


Oh, listening now...

[badkitty3804]

I can't help my urges to see some men .

:shrug:

I'm digging on this track, it seems like it needs some more layers though...I need to listen more though, someone interrupted.

[K-netic]

There is some random thumping noise that I don't like. Doesn't seem to belong in the song. It also feels like it is building up towards something, but it never does.

Not bad bad though. Over all I liked it. Just feels like it needs something.

[Moebius]

Well, I just started it like 2 days ago, so it only has one major theme in it at this point. I will add a second movement to it soon. In all, I would like it to have 3 or 4 movements in it.

[NotWickity]

I'm about to add a movement to my day as well, so it works out. In the end, so to speak.

Yeah, I really like the break in the track, but it def needs some more love before it's floor ready. :raveon:

[Moebius]

I just added some elements to it to make it a complete. It has a funky groove to it. Kinda makes me shake my ass.

I think I need to go through and and add some fades between the pieces, and it will be done.

[Moebius]

Wick, I certainly hope everything came out okay.

[Liftedtrance]

thanks for emailing it to me.

can I ask what you used to make it?

I liked what I heard.
I didn't hear a random thumping noise tho.....

I think at some point it should change gears, where only some
of the basic elements of the beat remain, but everything else over
it changes, and kind of picks up the pace to some degree.

maybe another layer or so throughout the song but basically,
just add another movement I would say and this would be something
to be very proud of.
not that you shouldnt already be proud, b/c I think it's pretty good.

[Moebius]

Thanks man!!!! It is good to hear some positive crit. I need to figure out what I need to add as another movement. I would like to have a vocal movement, but that means I need to find someone that can sing.


hehe.