Yes it is worse than G.W. Poo that has been festering for weeks
it's pretty bad. But I've heard worse.
It's okay.
It is the most awesome song that I have ever heard and I think I just crapped my pants.
Last edited by djmasamune; 2003-08-03 at 02:44 PM.
"If God is a DJ, then the world is your sampler, and your life is the vinyl, remix reality. "
Fabulous Line... love the theory...
i think this is the link you're looking for:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/djmasamunemusic.htm
definitly not a variation of styles... you're using different elements from different genres...
the vocals aren't very flowy, you've got this sweet voice one second and then this MC that chimes in.... it almost sounds like piano chords in the background... it sounds unorganized... you need to pinpoint your beats a little more in my opinion, it just sounds a little scattered, nice builds and low points, don't try to fuse so much together... go with the old theory: less is best... constructive criticism ;)
thanks for the replies! I don't know what I can do to make the vocals more 'flowy' ... I'll try. I was going on a linkin park/evanessance kick with the sing/rap thing. I know, I'm no Eminem or Vanilla Ice, but I try ^_~ Not sure what you mean by pinpoint the beats though ... Anyway, I hope you enjoyed the 5:30 it took to listen to the song!
the beats flow at some points but some of them come in at the wrong time, by "pinpointing" i just meant you need to lock down the rhythm of it all bc like i said before it just seems a little unorganized ;)
how did this get back up at the top???
somebody must have voted.
threads seem to be resurrecting themselves right and left this week.
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Theres multiple songs on the download page....which song are you talking about in the first place....
the song was 'ravers manifesto'
Josh only thing I can say is that most hard house tracks follow a 32 along with your 8...... or a 16 instead of 32..... but a couple points in your track you hit a 24 track which kinda kills the flow I do have to agree with valencia styles on the fact that a little pin pointing is needed here and there besides that the basic of it is good.... you gave me a copy of this song before and it is one of your better songs and has potential with a little tweaking it could be really good.....
32 tracks as in 32 sounds going on at once, or 32 measure? I assume since each of these numbers are divisable by 8 you mean they are measures, if so, I don't see how 24 beats (3 measures, 8 beats) would kill a flow unless it cuts off a musical phrase. I don't really understand the post.
Its not about the musical phase cut..... Im just saying from a hard house dj`s perspective Im stuck on 16 or 32 measures before a change in mix..... But then again I cant bitch cuz I used a 8 count measure in my hard breaks track..... from anyone else listening it would sound fine.......
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