Wickity isnspired me to make a break beat song.

[Moebius]

http://www.electronicmusic.us/music/DynastaticOverture.mp3

I was listening to destroyer earlier this week, and wick was on. Blowin up the spot as usual, and he inspired me to make a break beat song. I don't know if it is any good, but take a listen!

:feedback: please.

[badkitty3804]

awww. He's your inspiration! :affection:

Anthony and Chris sitting in a tree...
K-I-S-S-I-N-G
First comes love,
then comes marriage....

:affection:

[Moebius]

But did you like it?

[Liftedtrance]

is it possible for you to email me your song?
work blocks me from going to that website to hear it....
but I'd like to check it owt..

[badkitty3804]

*listening now*

[Bioteknik]

well do you (mobius) like it? it doesn't have very many elements to really call it a full song.

[NotWickity]

awww. He's your inspiration! :affection:

Anthony and Chris sitting in a tree...
K-I-S-S-I-N-G
First comes love,
then comes marriage....

:affection:
Why are you always trying to start some shit? :traviswork:


See, I'm just spreading the gospel. Everyone likes breaks, they just need to be shown the way. :raveon:


Oh, listening now...

[badkitty3804]

I can't help my urges to see some men :snog:.

:shrug:

I'm digging on this track, it seems like it needs some more layers though...I need to listen more though, someone interrupted.

[K-netic]

There is some random thumping noise that I don't like. Doesn't seem to belong in the song. It also feels like it is building up towards something, but it never does.

Not bad bad though. Over all I liked it. Just feels like it needs something.

[Moebius]

Well, I just started it like 2 days ago, so it only has one major theme in it at this point. I will add a second movement to it soon. In all, I would like it to have 3 or 4 movements in it.

[NotWickity]

I'm about to add a movement to my day as well, so it works out. In the end, so to speak. :D

Yeah, I really like the break in the track, but it def needs some more love before it's floor ready. :raveon:

[Moebius]

I just added some elements to it to make it a complete. It has a funky groove to it. Kinda makes me shake my ass.

I think I need to go through and and add some fades between the pieces, and it will be done.

[Moebius]

Wick, I certainly hope everything came out okay.

[Liftedtrance]

thanks for emailing it to me.

can I ask what you used to make it?

I liked what I heard.
I didn't hear a random thumping noise tho.....

I think at some point it should change gears, where only some
of the basic elements of the beat remain, but everything else over
it changes, and kind of picks up the pace to some degree.

maybe another layer or so throughout the song but basically,
just add another movement I would say and this would be something
to be very proud of.
not that you shouldnt already be proud, b/c I think it's pretty good.

[Moebius]

Thanks man!!!! It is good to hear some positive crit. I need to figure out what I need to add as another movement. I would like to have a vocal movement, but that means I need to find someone that can sing.


hehe.

[not applicable]

its a good base for a track.

now you gotta find that shit thats gonna bling.

there is a slight thumping noise i heard, i do have to admit.

dont get me wrong this is a good start.

maybe have that shit build and breakdown.

then get some kind of vocal or diff hook that you can drop in for the last third of the track right before it breaks down for the outro. have that shit repeat somehow till the real final outro you have is.

i dont know much about producing, im just thinking in terms of if i was gonna drop it what i would want it to do.

one of the things i like about breaks is the ability to cut. i didnt really hear any places that would be ill for a cut.

the phrases just gonna sneak by and theres no like umph to it, you know? get something thats gonna grab those fuckers by the throat and make them wanna shake their ass. that makes em bob their head without even realizing it.

this is a good base and im interested to see how it develops. good work.

although im suprised wickity didnt inspire you to create a brittany remix.

[Liftedtrance]

its a good base for a track.

now you gotta find that shit thats gonna bling.

there is a slight thumping noise i heard, i do have to admit.

dont get me wrong this is a good start.

maybe have that shit build and breakdown.

then get some kind of vocal or diff hook that you can drop in for the last third of the track right before it breaks down for the outro. have that shit repeat somehow till the real final outro you have is.

i dont know much about producing, im just thinking in terms of if i was gonna drop it what i would want it to do.

one of the things i like about breaks is the ability to cut. i didnt really hear any places that would be ill for a cut.

the phrases just gonna sneak by and theres no like umph to it, you know? get something thats gonna grab those fuckers by the throat and make them wanna shake their ass. that makes em bob their head without even realizing it.

this is a good base and im interested to see how it develops. good work.

although im suprised wickity didnt inspire you to create a brittany remix.

:stupid:
more creative criticism to make note of. rawk.

[NotWickity]

although im suprised wickity didnt inspire you to create a brittany remix.
http://www.shadoware.com/forum_imgs/eatthiskitten.jpg

[Moebius]

Eat the Kitten!!!!

[CharlesM]

Not bad for your first breaks track, but it does need another chapter, if you know what i mean. It gets a little repeatative. If at first you dont suceed, try and try again. Dont ever give up!!

[Moebius]

Thanks man, I think I will add a horn section before the break. I want to add vocals in the second build.

I will figure it out.

[not applicable]

so................any updates on this?

[Moebius]

I actually did some more work on this track, but I still need the bling vocals. I did have Oron Haus and Susan over this past weekend. They listened to the changes, and loved them. I will work on the vocals soon. I might just do them myself.

[not applicable]

cool. let me know. im curious as to how this comes out.

[Moebius]

I have updated the link with the new take on the track. I will add a vocal next. I think it is starting to rock.

www.electronicmusic.us/music/DynastaticOverture.mp3

[not applicable]

ok, its getting there.

but wheres the breakdown?

wheres the build.

the phrases still just slip by unnoticed.

as a dj i look for the slamminest part of the record and try to accentuate that part.

i would find no parts to highlight on this.

also, it seems like theres alot of shit thats going on that doesnt tie it all together.

the beat is too weak.

make it stronger and nastier.

add drum breaks at the end of each phrase.

make it come in, but then make that shit really kick in.

so you can drop that shit in a mix and let them feel that shit.

you dont want some song thats just gonna be liek uh, whats that? oh who cares, the next mix is starting.

you see?

it needs alot more grab your balls shit.

think raw.

[Bioteknik]

yeah, this has come a ways since the first clip.. but like n/a is saying it's not really going anywhere. it's pretty much the same break throughout, it needs some fills and edits. you might want to double up the snare to make it punch more. some builds and drops..

[Wickity]

I like it. It is a little bland though...

Try adding some cowbell. :thumbsup:

[Moebius]

I am still working on it, and it will go through some more major changes. I will not be adding anymore sounds to it unless it is a cowbell.

[Wickity]

:afterbuzz:

Excellent.