Feedback on RyRy's CD

[sassypance]

OK Track 1, I was totally perplexed lol.... what was that? It sounded like an indie rock band singing to classical... you have GOT to explain that to me...

I'm up to Track 8 and I heard the same vocal throughout 5 tracks and that was something that made me go hmmm... It was a vocal I liked though so I didn't mind the repitition.

What was your BPM range? It sounds like you were at about 140 or so, I notice it speeding up a bit but there was some really mellow points for a few minutes there.

Track 9 gets an A+ :thumbsup: HOW CLASSIC AND MONUMENTAL, love it. Nicely done.

It's been very very dark, I would have a liked a little bit of a cheese track thrown in here or there to make me bounce a bit :P

MMM a siren :yummy: very yummy

Track 10 was such a teaser... but that rocks, reminds me of Here Comes the Pain.... build up, break down, build up even more, break down, big build and BOOM :thumbsup:

12-14 were a bit mellow for me, good beats never the less though

16 I really liked the vocals, definitly trancey and cheesy, I'm glad you threw atleast one in there!!!! :smooch:

17 lol nice ending LOL

all in all 3/4 stars :yourock:

[ryry]

aw thanks thalia!! i'm glad you lliked it :-D here's a tracklisting for ya:

01. a perfect circle - the nurse who loved me [virgin]
02. christiaan & alex calver - voodoo [glitch]
03. bk & andy farley - step away (endorphin remix) [nukleuz]
04. ali wilson & matt smallwood - just listen (d.a.v.e. the drummer remix) [vicious circle]
05. winnebago warriors - trailer trash (chris liberator and the geezer's trash the trailer and weigh it in mix) [stay up forever remixes]
06. maddox & rundell - so long [tidy trax]
07. paul glazby - beautiful [vicious circle]
08. a star - up against it [passion]
09. lab4 - candyman (guyver remix) [tidy trax]
10. casper - tune your bass 2 up [casper traxx]
11. ultra heat treat - i have you now [12 inch thumpin hard]
12. dynamic intervention & sol ray - music is my weapon [e-traxx]
13. tobes - real high [shock records]
14. nik denton - go ahead with the music [toolbox]
14. al green - take it away (justin bourne & the knuckleheadz remix) [short circuit]
15. lucid - lucid [lucid]
16. Goldfinger - The End of the Day [Mojo / Jive]

the bpm ranges from like 146 at the beginning to about 153/154 near the end.

i agree about the mellowness near the end that doesn't fit. that's something that repeated listenings made me realize, but of course it's too late to fix, lol ;-)

explanation of track 1 .. well you can see what it is up there ... it's a beautiful song and i think it sets the tone well for "Voodoo" (the first electronica track on the CD) and the first couple songs ... i just felt it fit right :-) i've gotten some more comments on it from people who don't understand why a hard house CD starts out with a ballad ... which showed me i went in the right direction :-)

[sassypance]

146??? no way dude, u gotta be shittin me! it seemed pretty chill like 140 or under even, wow i'm surprised.

yeah i noticed the maddox & rundell vocal "it's been so long" repeated over and over and over again but like i said i didn't mind it because i like that vocal so :shrug:

but definitly :thumbsup:

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[ManofWar]

Nice RyRy! My first demo iz dun. Send me an addy.

[sassypance]

ok so i listened to it in the car today.... i played the cd first in my computer so i don't know but it seemed slower than what it was in the car.... yeah you're right it was definitly in the 146+ range :thumbsup: bassline could have been a bit harder though, i tried to tweak it some myself but couldn't do a whole lot otherwise as always :thumbsup:

[beth]

i want a copy!

[ryry]

PM me your address and i'll get you a copy :-)

[ryry]

Ry in full effect

\m/ :-D